BayBlades

That was so fun when we play bayblades.  "I've once been a champion."
"Oh really?" They say, "Where are your old ones?" They ask.
I pull them out of my pocket.
"Wow"
Neil and Andre say with amazement.
"Told you!" I said.
Then the bell went off.

By Chase

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Ella's Spooky Story

“That was so freaky,” I yell as I run down the stairs.  By the time I get to the bottom of the stairs Ameria has snot coming out of her nose we were cracking up. Then we heard the sound of a hand squeaking down the banister and the sound of foot step’s as if someone was walking down the stairs. So, we went back up to listen.  To see if it would happen again.  It did!  But it sounded different.  It was like someone stepping on wooden steps instead of the carpeted ones we had had walked up.

I wonder… was it a real ghost?

By Ella

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