Showing posts with label Chase. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Chase. Show all posts

Tuesday, May 29, 2012

BayBlades

That was so fun when we play bayblades.  "I've once been a champion."
"Oh really?" They say, "Where are your old ones?" They ask.
I pull them out of my pocket.
"Wow"
Neil and Andre say with amazement.
"Told you!" I said.
Then the bell went off.

By Chase

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