Monday, May 7, 2012

Ella's Spooky Story

“That was so freaky,” I yell as I run down the stairs.  By the time I get to the bottom of the stairs Ameria has snot coming out of her nose we were cracking up. Then we heard the sound of a hand squeaking down the banister and the sound of foot step’s as if someone was walking down the stairs. So, we went back up to listen.  To see if it would happen again.  It did!  But it sounded different.  It was like someone stepping on wooden steps instead of the carpeted ones we had had walked up.
I wonder… was it a real ghost?
By Ella

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5 comments:

  1. Congratulations Ella for being the first piece of writing shared on this blog!

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  2. wow Ella great piece of writing :)

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  3. You better not show that to little kids.

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  4. nice scary story Ella

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